First Time I Saw

In writing we were given a task for the first time I saw... First we had a mambuger plan (wich is pretty must a writing plan that looks like the layers on a hamburger) then we wrote the story on a google doc. Here is the story:

First Time I Saw ...


Left hand, right hand, left foot, right foot. A few black rocks fell down and hit me on the head, the heat was unbearable. I got to the top finally, the mountan was beginning to erupt.

THERE IT WAS, WINGS SPEARED UP LIKE A t, THE MAJESTIC ANIMAL WAS ABOUT TO DO IT, THIS WAS THE MOMENT, THIS WAS THE REASON I CAME ALL THIS WAY… IT JUMPED, BUT IT DID NOT FLY, it was falling! I had to do something! I jumpED and caUGHT the stubby little this and curled it in my arms. 

IT LOOKED AT ME AS IF TO SAY ‘THX BRAH U R A TRUE HUMMIE,’ THEN I SET IT FREE AND IT FLEW AWAY… SO BEAUTIFUL…

BTW IT’S A DO-DO

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