Paragraphs
In writing our focus is paragraphs we learnt about where we put them and why we put them in. We put them in when; there is a change in the dialog speaker, when the topic is changed, when the location is changed and when the time is changed. Mr. B made us do a 15 minute quick write focusing on paragraphs. Here is mine: The ball of light slowly rose up from the horizon, beams of light arose from its core. “It's so beautiful,” I spoke, destroying the silence. “Yeah, it is.” Replied Reverse Giraffe; he was the only intelligent giraffe with a long body and short legs. By the time the campfire went out the sun was fully up and in the sky. The car bumped up and down across the stone road as we set off back to the city. “We sure don’t see the stars like that in the city do we,” spoke Reverse Giraffe. “Nah, never…” I replied. “So what do you wanna do once we get to the city?” “I would like to get some Maccas… if you’re okay with that,” “Nah I’m fine, I’ll ju...